Second Year Winner: The Jig

WRIT 2710, Grammar and Proofreading. CD: Dunja Baus, TA: Megan Hillman.

Abstract

“The Jig” tells a lively story filled with music and dance, drinking and laughter, memory and action – all in one 200-word sentence that demonstrates, at the same time, mastery of the technical aspects of sentence construction and exceptional facility and sensitivity to the creative, expressive elements of both language and writing. Incorporating requirements to include seven grammatical components – from an absolute phrase to a non-restrictive modifier – as well as a designated number of esoteric vocabulary items, the writer succeeds in conjuring a vivid scene where a single pianist brings a pub to life as she plays a jig - stirring feet and emotions, laughter and memories – as young and old are caught up in the joy of the dance. While a kind of verbal high wire act, “The Jig” is an exceptionally well-crafted piece of writing that transforms what could have been a mechanical exercise into a clever, entertaining, impressive narrative.